I think Cevahir shopping centre is the most famous in Turkey.Cevahir shopping centre in Mecidiyeköy,İstanbul.Cevahir shopping centre has a 349 staffs.This shopping centre provides restaurant services and malls.I think it's very funny shopping centre because Cevahir has a park for children.Finally it's my favorite shopping centre.
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Cool !!You have uploaded a photo to your post:)I loved it Erdi.Thee are some little mistakes in your paragraph.Can you please see me tomorow?
Best wishes
Beyza
Hi Erdi -
Your teacher Beyza sent me the link to your blog and asked me to comment. (I'm an English teacher too.) I enjoyed reading about the shopping center, and would like to visit it someday when I come t o Turkey.
One technical point about your spacing: you must put a space after every comma or period; otherwise it looks very strange to us.
All the best,
David in California
I think Cevahir shopping centre is the most famous in Turkey.SPACECevahir shopping centre in Mecidiyeköy,SPACEİstanbul.SPACECevahir shopping centre has a 349 staffs.SPACEThis shopping centre provides restaurant services and malls.SPACEI think it's very funny shopping centre because Cevahir has a park for children.SPACEFinally it's my favorite shopping centre.
ohh erydyyy it is very wonderful :)
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